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domingo, 31 de julio de 2011

August 1st - 5th: Stages in the process of writing a text.

Writing a text is a well-organised process. It follows some specific steps.

TABLE 2.

STEP
DESCRIPTION
Prewriting
Previous activities for gathering, organizing, classifying the information. It includes brainstorming, listing, diagramming, etc.
Drafting
The first writing produced in the process.
Revising
Reading   and checking  the first text produced.
Editing
Monitoring and correcting the text.
Publishing
The final text already checked and adjusted.

  TASK  2.


v  Using the diagram drawn in TASK 1, write the first draft of your article. For this purpose, write three paragraphs.  (about 90 words).
Support your work on the reading from the consulting site:  Jerry Decided To Buy a Gun.
Comment the article read and your draft with  with your team partners. 
v  Comment the article read with your team partners.
v  Comment your draft with your team partners.
v  Send your draft to the mail:  englisheohschool2011@gmail.com

v  The teacher will read it and will send it back to you  for the corresponding adjustment and final edition.
Purpose:  to write the first draft of an article that describes an event that happened in the surroundings of the neighborhood, the school or the locality.
Site  for consulting:



38 comentarios:

  1. reading Jerry decides to buy a gun is very interesting because one is to buy something that you love and not because they look or parecerce quire someone.
    miguel angel vargas tovar-905

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  2. toward learning is more fun

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  3. I found it very interesting that we learn to write texts in English.

    eoh-905.

    wilson alexis suarez rivera.

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  4. E.O.H.-903
    good afternoon
    This program seems to me the best thing that could happen to a school is a good idea my name is christian lopez andres lame.
    thanks

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  5. EOH-905 Miguel Angel Vrgas Tovar
    I liked this blog as a method of learning is very good and easy to use.

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  6. EOH-905 Miguel Angel Vrgas Tovar
    I liked this blog as a method of learning is very good and easy to use.

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  7. EOH-905 my name is:Hugo Alexander Torres Perez

    Professor Ivan Potier good afternoon, the work was interesting as we work cases of problems in the city

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  8. EOH-905 MY NAME IS ANDRES DAVID TORRES FERNANDEZ It is very easy I had a degree of difficulty but it was not difficult to solve the difficult task 2

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  9. eoh-905 mi name is:Hugo Alexander Torres Perez

    Professor Iván Potier good afternoon, the work was interesting as we work cases of problems in the city

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  10. eoh-905 my name is willinton torres fernandez the task 2 is very interesting and a little difficult

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  11. eoh-905 my name is camilo torres the task 1.2 are very good but little hard

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  12. EOH-905 my name is DAIRO SUARES the task IS very interesting ,it's not hard why I taste

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  13. eoh-905 mi name is:Hugo Alexander Torres Perez

    Professor Ivan Potier good afternoon, the work was interesting as we work cases of problems in the city

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  14. el task 2 me parecio interesante, podemos identificar cualquier tipo de noticia de una manera sencilla, ademas me gusta el uso del blog porque nos ayuda en diferentes formas a mejorar la calidad de las tareas.

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  15. santiago velasquez16 de agosto de 2011, 15:21

    eoh 905 good morning, my name is Santiago Velásquez this project seems very good and very funny

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  16. EOH-905
    Good evening , My name is Stefanny Geraldine Rodriguez Velasquez my view is that this blog is a great way to use technology to learn. thanks.

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  17. EOH-905
    Good evening , My name is Stefanny Geraldine Rodriguez Velasquez my view is that this blog is a great way to use technology to learn. thanks.

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  18. Esta actividad fue muy interesante porque asi aprendemos a escribir un articulo.
    Att: Laura Ariza
    E.O.H. 901 J.M.

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  19. EOH - 901
    OSCAR JAVIER CORTES HERRAN

    La actividad me pareció interesante, aunque un poco difícil de resolver.

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  20. este proyecto me parece muy bueno e interesante pus la interneth es una herramienta muy util para el estudio.
    con este proyecto me e podido perfeccionar como persona y como estudiante.
    las actividades que e realizado no se me han dificultado tanto.
    teissha sherith ariza barreto 901 jm EOH.

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  21. Andrea Carolina León Riveros17 de agosto de 2011, 19:49

    EOH-task2-903jm
    Good night for my teacher and to all the persons of this blog,I think that this project that be realize the school is very good.The task number 2 was something very complet for do.Thanks to all persons that created this blog

    For:Andrea Carolina León Riveros

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  22. Andrea Carolina León Riveros17 de agosto de 2011, 20:02

    EOH-903jm
    Good night for the teacher and to all the persons of this blog,I think that this project that be realize the school is very good.The task number 2 was something very complet for do.Thanks to all persons that created this blog

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  23. EOH-TASK2-903
    good afternoon teacher ivan potier
    my name is jhoan francisco lopez rincon of curse
    903.The task 2 was interesting, we can identify any type of news in a simple way, helps me to improve the quality of work.

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  24. EOH-TASK 2-904

    NICOLAS RIVEROS ÁNGEL.I like to write the text on the news and this the Englishman helps to improve

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  25. good afternoon teacher, taks 2 was a very good job to develop

    EOH 904
    JINTH VANESSA PEREZ CORREAL

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  26. diego eduardo nieto18 de agosto de 2011, 16:43

    EOH-904
    good evening, my name is diego eduardo nieto the activities of this blog are very important for my learning and improving my mind, very good activities.

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  27. EOH-904 my name is diego eduardo nieto
    the activities of this blog are very important for my learning and improving my mind, very good activities.

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  28. E.O.H- 903

    GOOD MORNING TEACHER
    MI NAME IS BRANDON ANDRES MORALES MIRANDA

    ACTIVITY WAS DIFFICULT BUT ME CAN DO AND EVEN SO IS BEST INTERNET JOBS ASER

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  29. La actividad Me parecio de lo maximo, pues aprendi algo nuevo.
    Kevin Giovanny Bautista Parra-901 j.m-E.O.H. school

    kevin giovanny bautista parra

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  30. EOH-905
    Good Afternoon Teacher Ivan Potier
    My Name Is Maria Fernanda Romero
    I find this blog interesting because apart from being an important site for us students is a communicative medium and easy to deliver the tasks. thanks

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  31. EOH-905
    Good Afternoon Teacher Ivan Potier
    My Name Is Maria Fernanda Romero
    I find this blog interesting because apart from being an important site for us students is a communicative medium and easy to deliver the tasks. thanks

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  32. EOH-905 Daniel Sepulveda,

    Good afternoon teacher Ivan, my name is Daniel Sepulveda and I'm doing the Task 2, Good bye.

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  33. me parece muy interesante porque la internet es un buen medio y aprendo mucho.
    pero algunas veces no me fue facil enviar las tareas

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  34. me parece muy interesante porque la internet en un buen medio donde aprendo mucho .
    pero algunas veces no me fue facilenviar las tareas.
    teissha ariza 901 jm E.O.H

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  35. EOH - 901
    OSCAR JAVIER CORTES HERRAN

    me pareció interesante realizar mi propio escrito y así mismo corregir mi errores

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  36. Good afternoon, I think the blog is very interesting and fun, because ours find activities that help us understand more the language of English

    Angie Castillo/EOH/901

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  37. EOH-902 ALVARO GAMBOA BARAJAS
    Tuve dificultades con los conectores. Gracias

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